My Brother Said I Imagined His Promise Right Before My Store Opened – Part 2

Story code: ST-000173

Part 2: The One Consequence of His Denial

Once Derek said he had never promised to hand Alyssa the scissors, every practical detail in the storefront bent around that claim. Nina could see it happen in real time. The room stopped asking what had been said and started asking why Alyssa was resisting the obvious fix.

“Can we just move the sign?” one guest offered.

Marisol was already reaching toward it, but Alyssa spoke first. “No, because that’s not the point.”

Derek answered before Marisol could touch the display. “Exactly. The point is she’s upset and now she’s rewriting the setup.”

He said it softly, not as an accusation but as if he were helping everyone find the simplest path forward. Nina noticed how he never raised his voice. He stayed near the shelf, near the scissors, with that same measured posture. It made Alyssa’s short pauses and clipped replies stand out more.

Alyssa turned toward Marisol. “You called me to the ribbon. He was supposed to hand them over then.”

Marisol lifted her checklist a little. “I called you to the ribbon, yes. The scissors are part of the sequence. I just need them in your hand when we start the photo count.”

Derek nodded as if that settled it. “Right. In her hand. Not necessarily from me.”

There it was again: the cleaner wording. Nina watched two attendees shift back toward the pastry table, the way people do when they decide a disagreement is probably personal and not worth following. But the opening still could not begin, and that made the details harder to ignore.

If Derek was telling the truth, Alyssa had somehow positioned herself at the ribbon without first making sure she could physically reach the scissors. She had also done that while Marisol counted down the event, while guests gathered their phones, while Derek remained the closest person to the object. That version was possible in the way an awkward accident is possible. It just wasn’t tidy when Nina looked directly at the layout.

Nina stepped a little closer to the entrance. “Can I ask something practical?” she said.

Everybody looked at her because practical was a safer word than true.

Marisol gave a quick nod. “Please.”

Nina pointed, not at Derek, but at the path from Alyssa’s place at the ribbon to the shelf. “If she was always meant to pick them up herself, was she also supposed to turn her back to the guests, walk around the baskets, reach behind the sign, and then go back to the ribbon after you’d already set her for the photo?”

No one answered right away.

Derek looked at Nina for the first time. “Or,” he said, “she could have gotten them before she walked up there.”

Alyssa let out one brief sound through her nose, not quite a laugh. “Before I walked up there? While you were telling me to stand ready?”

“You keep adding things,” Derek said.

Evelyn came in again, voice sharpened by embarrassment. “Does it matter? The scissors are right here. This is becoming something it does not need to become.”

“It matters,” Alyssa said. “Because he’s acting like I invented a promise everyone was relying on.”

Derek spread his hands. “No one was relying on me. That’s what I’m saying.”

That sentence changed the shape of it. Nina saw Marisol lower her checklist and look directly at Derek now instead of at Alyssa.

“No one?” Marisol said. “Then why were you standing on the object side of the ribbon when I asked everyone to take positions?”

Derek’s answer came half a beat late. “Because I was helping.”

“With what?” Nina asked.

He gave her a flat look. “With setup.”

“Setup was done,” Alyssa said. “That’s why people were already taking pictures.”

Derek turned slightly toward the guests instead of toward her. “This is exactly what I mean. A simple delay becomes a whole story.”

But the simple delay had one stubborn consequence now. If nobody was relying on Derek, then his position by the shelf made less sense, not more. If Alyssa was meant to get the scissors on her own, then Marisol’s placement of her at the ribbon had skipped a necessary step. If the room accepted Derek’s version, Alyssa had to explain not only the promise, but the entire physical arrangement that had formed around it.

Nina could see that pressure landing. Every time Alyssa tried to restore the original sequence, she had to sound more detailed, more insistent, more exact. Derek only had to keep trimming the scene down to whatever looked easiest in the present tense.

Marisol exhaled once and looked at her phone. “Okay,” she said. “Hold on. I need to check my run sheet and reset the sequence.”

Derek’s shoulders changed by a fraction, a small tightening visible only because he had been so still until then.

“It’s a ribbon cutting,” he said. “There is no deep sequence.”

Marisol didn’t argue. She tapped her phone screen with her thumb, then glanced from the ribbon to the shelf to Derek’s place beside it. Nina followed that line too. For the first time, the room seemed less interested in whether Alyssa sounded emotional and more interested in the ordinary mechanics of how this opening had actually been staged.

Then Marisol asked the one dry question Derek had been steering everyone away from.

“Before we start over,” she said, “who, exactly, was assigned to place the scissors into Alyssa’s hand at the count?”


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