Twenty Units – Part 4

Story code: ST-000817

Part 4: Bitter Sugar

The suffocating darkness didn’t hold her for long. A massive, involuntary surge of adrenaline-her failing body’s final, desperate defense mechanism-violently ripped Elena back into consciousness.

The harsh yellow glare of the dome light burned through her eyelids. Thick, heavy hands were pulling at her fleece jacket. The man was practically on top of her, his broad shoulders blocking the open driver’s side door, his arms reaching blindly across her lap toward the passenger floorboard.

Her starving brain could not process his panicked realization about the collection letters scattered around them. It couldn’t comprehend that he was desperately looking for her medicine. It only registered the immediate, terrifying threat. The hulking silhouette who had just aimed a tactical rifle at her chest had now breached her car.

“No,” she gasped, the word tearing out of her parched throat as a wet, desperate rasp.

She thrashed backward against the seat, her limbs driven entirely by the raw, chaotic fumes of her fight-or-flight response. Vance flinched at her sudden movement, his hands flying up defensively. “Wait, stop! Don’t move, I’m trying to help!” he shouted, his voice cracking with panic.

But his large frame looming over her only amplified her absolute terror. Elena twisted her torso violently to the right, ignoring the agonizing protests of her paralyzed muscles. She lunged her hand down into the narrow gap beneath the passenger seat, exactly where she had shoved the weapon earlier.

Her knuckles scraped against the metal track, and her numb fingers wrapped tightly around the cold, checkered grip of the 9mm.

She didn’t have the strength to aim. She didn’t have the clarity to warn him. She just dragged the heavy steel upward.

Vance saw the gun clear the edge of the center console. “No, no!” he screamed, throwing his entire body backward out of the open door.

Elena squeezed the trigger.

The gunshot inside the enclosed cabin was a physically punishing force. The deafening crack ruptured her eardrums, leaving behind a shrill, paralyzing ring. The muzzle flash painted the sedan in a blinding, instantaneous stroke of white. Her weakened wrist buckled completely under the violent recoil, jerking the barrel sharply to the right.

The bullet tore straight across the passenger side of the cabin. It punched directly through the side pocket of her heavy leather purse resting on the seat, then slammed into the passenger window. The tempered glass exploded outward into the night in a catastrophic shower of glittering fragments.

The gun slipped from Elena’s useless fingers, clattering heavily onto the center console. She slumped back against the headrest, her chest heaving, her vision narrowing back into a pinprick. She had missed. She was completely defenseless.

Then, a new scent pierced through the acrid, choking cloud of burnt gunpowder filling the car.

It was the sharp, distinct, medicinal odor of cresol. The unmistakable, sterile smell of insulin preservatives.

Elena’s heavy, drooping eyes dragged themselves toward the passenger seat. The bullet had ripped a jagged hole straight through the insulated cooler pocket of her purse. A steady, devastating drip of clear liquid was leaking from the torn fabric, pooling onto the rubber floor mats below. Her backup vials-the medicine she had been starving her body to afford, the entire reason she was on the brink of a coma-were shattered into a thousand useless pieces.

A quiet, helpless sob rattled in her chest. She was going to die here in this driveway.

Vance slowly pulled himself up using the open car door, his face completely drained of color. He looked from the gun on the console to the shattered passenger window. Then, he smelled the chemical odor and saw the leaking purse.

“No. Oh, God, no,” Vance breathed. The terrifying reality of what she had just destroyed hit him instantly.

He scrambled back into the driver’s side, his hands frantically tearing through the scattered debris on the seats. He shoved his own final notice out of the way, digging wildly through the spilled contents of her purse until his fingers closed around a crushed plastic tube of emergency glucose gel.

Elena couldn’t fight him anymore. Her head rolled to the side as the gray vignette finally swallowed the edges of her vision. Vance grabbed her jaw, his fingers trembling violently as he forced her mouth open. He ripped the plastic seal off the tube with his teeth and jammed the nozzle between her lips.

“Swallow it,” he begged, his voice a frantic, desperate sob as he squeezed the thick, sugary paste onto her tongue. “Come on, Elena, swallow it! Don’t do this to me!”

The sweet, artificial syrup coated her throat, mixing with the metallic taste of adrenaline and fear. Elena choked, her body automatically swallowing the life-saving glucose. She lay trapped against the driver’s seat, her heavy eyes locked on the terrifying face of her predator. The man whose relentless legal threats had forced her to ration her medicine was now on his knees in the broken glass, frantically force-feeding her sugar to keep the blood on his hands from turning into a murder charge.


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