Trespassing in the Rain – Part 1

Story code: ST-001649

Part 1: The Wrong Driveway

The soaked cardboard tore under his raw fingers, yielding just enough to slip from his grip as he hauled the massive, unmarked cube backward down the stranger’s steep asphalt driveway. Rain lashed against his face in heavy, freezing sheets, pasting his shirt to his spine, but he braced his boots against the slick pavement and heaved once more. The box slid another six inches with a wet, grinding scrape. His muscles burned with a fiery lactic ache, every tendon in his forearms screaming for him to let go. He refused. He adjusted his grip, digging his fingernails under the thick plastic shipping straps cutting into the top flaps, and leaned his entire body weight backward. The pavement was slick with a mix of motor oil and pouring rain, offering almost no traction. He slipped, his knee slamming hard into the concrete, sending a sharp spike of agony shooting up his thigh. He bit down on a groan, scrambled back to his feet, and kept pulling.

There were three of these colossal cartons in total, sitting right in the middle of the wrong driveway, delivered to an address that was not his. He had already managed to drag the first two out to the street and hoist them over the lowered tailgate of his idling truck. This was the last one, and it was by far the heaviest. The integrity of the cardboard was failing rapidly in the deluge. The corners were beginning to mush and buckle. If the bottom gave out, the contents would spill directly onto the flooded asphalt, ruined forever. He could not let that happen. He wrapped the plastic strap around his wrist to secure his hold, ignoring the way the thin plastic edge sliced into his skin. He dragged it another foot. Then another. He kept his head tucked down against the collar of his jacket to shield his eyes from the downpour, focusing entirely on the rhythmic necessity of pulling, stepping, and pulling again.

The neighborhood around him was a graveyard of dark, silent houses, locked up tight against the midnight storm. The only sound was the relentless drumming of rain on the pavement and the rasp of his own frantic breathing. He needed another two minutes. Just two minutes to reach the curb, tilt the enormous box against the bumper, and shove it into the bed of his truck. He took a deep breath of the freezing air and gave a massive yank, dragging the carton a full yard. It scraped loudly, the sound echoing off the brick facade of the towering house beside him. He winced at the noise, pausing for a single, agonizing second to listen. Only the wind answered. He relaxed his shoulders a fraction and reached down to reset his grip on the straps.

A searing, blinding flash of white light erupted from the eaves of the house.

Twin halogen motion-sensor floodlights snapped on, instantly transforming the dark driveway into a brilliantly illuminated stage. The sudden glare stabbed at his dark-adjusted eyes. He threw a hand up to shield his face, freezing in place like a cornered animal. Every drop of rain was suddenly highlighted in sharp relief, falling through the stark white beams in streaks of silver. He crouched low over the sodden cardboard, instinctively throwing his body over the top flaps to protect the box from the elements and the sudden exposure.

The heavy oak front door of the house swung open with a violent slam that cut through the noise of the storm.

A tall man stepped out onto the sheltered porch. He wore dark sweatpants and a heavy jacket, his bare feet shoved into rubber boots. The shadows of the porch hid his eyes, but the floodlights caught the dull, menacing gleam of black metal in his hands.

The mechanical, terrifyingly loud clack of a charging handle being pulled back and released echoed across the yard.

It was the unmistakable sound of a round being chambered into a rifle.

Elias froze completely, his hand still wrapped tightly around the plastic strapping of the box. He slowly turned his head, squinting through the blinding glare and the driving rain. The homeowner had the stock of an AR-15 pressed firmly into his shoulder, the elongated barrel aimed dead center at Elias’s chest. The red dot of a laser sight cut through the curtain of rain, dancing erratically before coming to rest directly over his heart.

The homeowner stepped off the porch and advanced two paces into the rain, the weapon never wavering. He stopped at the edge of the driveway, closing the distance to less than twenty feet.

“Take your hands off the box and step back,” the man yelled, his voice a harsh, serrated bark that easily carried over the downpour.

Elias looked at the laser dot on his chest, then down at the ruined, waterlogged cardboard beneath his hands. The bottom edge was tearing, dangerously close to giving way entirely. The rain was getting heavier. He tightened his grip on the plastic strap, wrapping it a second time around his raw knuckles.

He planted his boots squarely on the slick asphalt, squaring his shoulders against the man and the rifle.

“I told you to let go of it,” the homeowner shouted, taking another aggressive step forward. “I will drop you right there on the pavement.”

Elias did not raise his hands. He did not step away. He locked his jaw, stared directly into the blinding halogen lights, and pulled the box another six inches toward the street.

The man tightened his finger on the trigger and braced his stance.

The soaked cardboard tore under his raw fingers, yielding just enough to slip from his grip as he hauled the massive, unmarked cube backward down the stranger’s steep asphalt driveway. Rain lashed against his face in heavy, freezing sheets, pasting his shirt to his spine, but he braced his boots against the slick pavement and heaved once more. The box slid another six inches with a wet, grinding scrape. His muscles burned with a fiery lactic ache, every tendon in his forearms screaming for him to let go. He refused. He adjusted his grip, digging his fingernails under the thick plastic shipping straps cutting into the top flaps, and leaned his entire body weight backward. The pavement was slick with a mix of motor oil and pouring rain, offering almost no traction. He slipped, his knee slamming hard into the concrete, sending a sharp spike of agony shooting up his thigh. He bit down on a groan, scrambled back to his feet, and kept pulling.

There were three of these colossal cartons in total, sitting right in the middle of the wrong driveway, delivered to an address that was not his. He had already managed to drag the first two out to the street and hoist them over the lowered tailgate of his idling truck. This was the last one, and it was by far the heaviest. The integrity of the cardboard was failing rapidly in the deluge. The corners were beginning to mush and buckle. If the bottom gave out, the contents would spill directly onto the flooded asphalt, ruined forever. He could not let that happen. He wrapped the plastic strap around his wrist to secure his hold, ignoring the way the thin plastic edge sliced into his skin. He dragged it another foot. Then another. He kept his head tucked down against the collar of his jacket to shield his eyes from the downpour, focusing entirely on the rhythmic necessity of pulling, stepping, and pulling again.

The neighborhood around him was a graveyard of dark, silent houses, locked up tight against the midnight storm. The only sound was the relentless drumming of rain on the pavement and the rasp of his own frantic breathing. He needed another two minutes. Just two minutes to reach the curb, tilt the enormous box against the bumper, and shove it into the bed of his truck. He took a deep breath of the freezing air and gave a massive yank, dragging the carton a full yard. It scraped loudly, the sound echoing off the brick facade of the towering house beside him. He winced at the noise, pausing for a single, agonizing second to listen. Only the wind answered. He relaxed his shoulders a fraction and reached down to reset his grip on the straps.

A searing, blinding flash of white light erupted from the eaves of the house.

Twin halogen motion-sensor floodlights snapped on, instantly transforming the dark driveway into a brilliantly illuminated stage. The sudden glare stabbed at his dark-adjusted eyes. He threw a hand up to shield his face, freezing in place like a cornered animal. Every drop of rain was suddenly highlighted in sharp relief, falling through the stark white beams in streaks of silver. He crouched low over the sodden cardboard, instinctively throwing his body over the top flaps to protect the box from the elements and the sudden exposure.

The heavy oak front door of the house swung open with a violent slam that cut through the noise of the storm.

A tall man stepped out onto the sheltered porch. He wore dark sweatpants and a heavy jacket, his bare feet shoved into rubber boots. The shadows of the porch hid his eyes, but the floodlights caught the dull, menacing gleam of black metal in his hands.

The mechanical, terrifyingly loud clack of a charging handle being pulled back and released echoed across the yard.

It was the unmistakable sound of a round being chambered into a rifle.

Elias froze completely, his hand still wrapped tightly around the plastic strapping of the box. He slowly turned his head, squinting through the blinding glare and the driving rain. The homeowner had the stock of an AR-15 pressed firmly into his shoulder, the elongated barrel aimed dead center at Elias’s chest. The red dot of a laser sight cut through the curtain of rain, dancing erratically before coming to rest directly over his heart.

The homeowner stepped off the porch and advanced two paces into the rain, the weapon never wavering. He stopped at the edge of the driveway, closing the distance to less than twenty feet.

“Take your hands off the box and step back,” the man yelled, his voice a harsh, serrated bark that easily carried over the downpour.

Elias looked at the laser dot on his chest, then down at the ruined, waterlogged cardboard beneath his hands. The bottom edge was tearing, dangerously close to giving way entirely. The rain was getting heavier. He tightened his grip on the plastic strap, wrapping it a second time around his raw knuckles.

He planted his boots squarely on the slick asphalt, squaring his shoulders against the man and the rifle.

“I told you to let go of it,” the homeowner shouted, taking another aggressive step forward. “I will drop you right there on the pavement.”

Elias did not raise his hands. He did not step away. He locked his jaw, stared directly into the blinding halogen lights, and pulled the box another six inches toward the street.

The man tightened his finger on the trigger and braced his stance.


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