I froze a silent debtor’s bank account to hit my quota. – Part 2

Story code: ST-000857

Part 2: The Liquidation Protocol

I yanked the headset away from my ear, letting it rest around my neck. The noise didn’t stop. It wasn’t just in the earpiece anymore; the horrific grinding was bleeding out of the cheap Dell speakers mounted beneath my dual monitors, overriding my system volume settings.

“Ms. Lin? Maya?” I shouted, leaning toward the slender plastic microphone.

Only the rhythmic *shhh-thump, shhh-thump* of heavy suction answered me. It sounded like an industrial pump moving thick, viscous fluid.

I slammed my finger against the ‘Disconnect’ button on my softphone interface. The digital button depressed, turned a shaded gray, and immediately bounced back to red. *Active Call. Timer: 08:14.*

Panic flared in my chest, hot and sharp. If Quality Assurance caught a call dragging on with dead air or unresolved technical issues, they could flag the whole interaction and void the commission. I couldn’t lose this tier-three bump. I frantically clicked the mouse, dragging the cursor over to the main terminal window to hard-reset the program.

The application didn’t close. Instead, the entire user interface shifted. The standard blue-and-white grid of financial data-routing numbers, employer IDs, balance sheets-melted away in a wash of pixelated static. A new screen loaded, rendering in stark black and clinical neon green, looking more like a medical telemetry readout than a banking dashboard.

At the top, the bright banner that had just congratulated me for hitting my quota morphed. It now read: *Execution Phase 1: Bio-Asset Liquidation.*

My breath caught in my throat. I stared at the fields on the screen, trying to make sense of the new data. Where Maya’s checking account balance had been, there was now a real-time bar graph. It was labeled in milliliters.

“What the hell is this?” I muttered, my hands beginning to shake.

I looked around the bullpen. The office was dimly lit, rows of gray fabric cubicles stretching out under flickering fluorescent tubes. A hundred other agents were hunched over their monitors, murmuring into their headsets, delivering the exact same aggressive scripts. The low hum of their voices blended into a droning, hive-like murmur, completely oblivious to the nightmare unfolding on my terminal. The agent next to me, a college kid named Jared, was casually chewing a pen cap while mechanically threatening to seize a single mother’s minivan.

The wet suction noise from my speakers grew louder, punctuated by a sharp, bone-deep *crack*.

Maya let out a ragged, gurgling gasp. It wasn’t a scream. It was the horrific, desperate sound of someone trying to draw air through a collapsed airway.

“Maya!” I yelled, no longer caring about QA or professional scripts. “Maya, what’s happening? Are you okay?”

No answer. Just the relentless *shhh-thump* of the pump, growing faster.

The bar graph on my screen crept upward. *500 mL. 1000 mL.* I watched in horror as a ledger populated on the right side of the screen. It wasn’t detailing bank fees or court costs.

*Plasma: $120/L. Cornea: $800. Bone Marrow: $300/oz.*

Next to the graph, a dollar amount ticked up in agonizingly slow increments. *$42.00… $84.00… $204.00…*

They were selling her. Liquidating her physical body in real-time to cover the four thousand, two hundred dollars. And I had pushed the button. I had locked her in.

The screen flashed bright red. *Phase 2: Solid Asset Repossession.*

The mechanical whirring shifted into a high-speed whine, like a surgical bone saw biting into something dense. Maya’s voice broke through the noise-a thin, reedy squeal that sounded barely human, followed by a sickening tearing sound.

I couldn’t breathe. I grabbed the thick black cord of my headset and yanked it out of the USB port, desperate to sever the connection. The speakers shrieked with static, but the audio feed remained live. The company’s proprietary software had completely hijacked my machine.

I reached down and slammed my hand against the physical power button on the computer tower. Nothing. I held it down for ten seconds, praying for a hard crash. The green power indicator stayed illuminated, staring back at me like a mocking eye.

On the screen, the monetary value spiked. *$1,200.00.* Beside it, a wireframe model of a human torso appeared, a red blinking light pulsing over the left kidney.

“No, no, no,” I begged, clawing at my own hair. “Cancel. How do I cancel?”

There was no cancel button. I had clicked the absolute last resort. The nuclear option. I had told her it couldn’t be paused or reversed. I had bulldozed her into it just to save my own miserable apartment. I had trained myself to stop listening to their stories, and because of that, I hadn’t realized I was working for a slaughterhouse.

I stood up, knocking my ergonomic chair backward. It slammed into the partition. “Hey!” I shouted, waving my arms at the nearest supervisor station. “Hey, I need help! Something’s wrong with the system! Stop the execution!”

Dave, the floor manager, didn’t even look up from his tablet. He just tapped his pen against his headset, signaling he was on an escalated call, and waved me away.

I looked back at my monitor. The wireframe model was flashing faster. Maya’s breathing had completely stopped, replaced entirely by the automated, sterile sounds of a surgical harvest.

The balance hit *$4,200.00*.

The speakers popped, and then dead, heavy silence fell over the line.

A clean, white pop-up box appeared in the center of the screen. *Garnishment Complete. Target 15 Finalized. Commission Authorized.*

I slumped over my desk, my stomach heaving. I tasted bile at the back of my throat. I had just killed a woman. For what? A two-hundred-dollar commission bonus and a month’s rent. My hands were slick with cold sweat as I stared at the words *Commission Authorized*.

Then, the screen flickered. The black and neon-green interface didn’t revert to the standard financial dashboard. Instead, a new file auto-loaded from the queue.

I hadn’t clicked anything. The system was pushing the next account automatically.

The name at the top of the file was *Trenton Vance*. My name.

My employee ID was listed in the routing number field. My property management company-the one threatening me with eviction-was listed as the primary creditor.

*Balance Due: $1,450.00. Status: Delinquent.*

A red banner spanned the top of the monitor, identical to the one I had just used to harvest Maya.

*Warning: Agent quota offset applied. Insufficient commission generated to clear personal arrears. Account flagged for internal garnishment.*

My heart hammered against my ribs like a trapped bird. I reached for the mouse, desperate to close the window, to log out, to run out of the building. But the cursor was frozen dead in the center of the screen.

Through the cheap Dell speakers, I heard the faint, distinct sound of a heavy, steel gear slipping into place.

Then, a mechanical whirring began to spin up right beneath my own desk.


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